Brown Eyed Girl

I agree, this poem is stunning. really very well thought out. Me being slightly greedy would have love to read a bit more, but thats just me! My favourite bit ...

Hey! I gotta admit, this poem kinda blew me away. It leaps off the page, its real, raw emotions that are brutal but hard to take your eyes away. I ...

Hey... I really liked this poem, its simple and gives great contrast to the too raw emotions and how they can both be present at the same time. I think ...

I can't believe only two people have commmented on your poem, I think it's beautiful. It can relate to people's lives and experience. Their failures which in fact does make ...

i totally agree, haven't been on for a while but this was great. Better than some books I've read. I love the imagery you use. April kinda reminds me of ...

Hey, I think u kidnapped my brain! Good job and I agree defo a situation a lot of people would find themselves in. But i do disagree. I feel the ...

Hey, nicely done! I totally love this poem. It's great idea. Reminds me. Your dying to write and you want it to be amazing. Easy to empathise with. I would ...

Heya just me! I do like it, u were lying!! hehe Good idea and you could do a lot with an opening like that. Only thing I have to say, ...

Hey, I'm returning the favour of a review and I'm gunna ad you as a friend because you can never have too many friends! Your poem is lovely and I ...

Hey, Amazing job. It felt like you were talking to me personally, it felt so naturally written. Beautifully done. No mistakes as I can see but I'm not really a ...

Hey. WOW! You have captured what I could only wish to capture in a poem. My favourite bit was how you mentioned you say you love someone out of habit ...

Hey, Cool poem. simplicity makes it so ... perfect! So short and sweet, I think it would be a nice way poem to open a book with, first page. Think ...

Hey, Great poem! I can't believe no one has commented on it, I've read them all and I like them all but this is my fav. It reminds me of ...

Hi, I liked your poem it made me think which is a good thing! Very serious for your first piece but that's good for me. I'll warn you as a ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! :lol: I'm kinda new to this stuff so I'm not gunna be heavily critical because I'm too nice!! lol Sooooo I really like your piece it's ...